I am taking a poetry workshop and will be posting some of my work here.

These particular poems are rough drafts and I am in the revising stage.

If you have time to read over some here are a few things that I would like comments on:

  • do you think the poem flows well
  • is it clear
  • or are you confused
  • is it predictable
  • does it take a wrong turn…

And if you notice something else, well tell me that too.


And keep the comments coming.