I am taking a poetry workshop and will be posting some of my work here.
These particular poems are rough drafts and I am in the revising stage.
If you have time to read over some here are a few things that I would like comments on:
- do you think the poem flows well
- is it clear
- or are you confused
- is it predictable
- does it take a wrong turn…
And if you notice something else, well tell me that too.
And keep the comments coming.